After receiving feedback from my lecturer regarding my treatment, I had a slight wake up call with what is to be expected of myself on this module. I wrote the treatment in a University mindset, but forgot that this film is something that I want to take further than it just being a project at Unversity. I was informed that my treatment was too academic in it's structure. It was boring and it didn't need to be as plain as I had expected.
So, with that in mind, I've set about 'spicing' it up to catch the readers attention and keep them reading on. The treatment is probably the first thing a studio or financial contributor will read, SO IT HAS TO SELL THE IDEA!
The issue with my treatment was that it was too boring and mundane, which may work as a style choice for costumes and locations within the film, unfortunately it won't work to sell it!
Catchy headings, short bursts of text and straight to the point answers are what's needed!
So, with that in mind, I've set about 'spicing' it up to catch the readers attention and keep them reading on. The treatment is probably the first thing a studio or financial contributor will read, SO IT HAS TO SELL THE IDEA!
The issue with my treatment was that it was too boring and mundane, which may work as a style choice for costumes and locations within the film, unfortunately it won't work to sell it!
Catchy headings, short bursts of text and straight to the point answers are what's needed!
Expect a re-vamped treatment to be online soon!
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